Billed as a short story, on my Kindle App, it ran out to an even hundred pages. Took me three nights to finish it, and most short stories, I can consume in a single sitting, that being the point. So this was more akin to a novella rather than a short story. Your mileage may vary, as “they” say.
Evocative pacing, nice language, setting, and a good turn of the phrase, but what caught my attention, part way through? Some comment about “Past life experience,” or that moment when one is jumping a timeline. “Precognition,” is actually a better term, when it occurs.
I almost copied the line, something about “Ever have that experience where you know you’ve been here before?” I’m not getting it right, and I’ve already returned the story, so I won’t go trying to find it. Besides, I didn’t highlight the passage, paused long enough, and just got stuck looking through my old notes to figure out where, when, I know this has happened to me.
The details are sketchy, and getting worse with time.
I was flirting with Austin. There used to be a rudimentary stage under the oaks in old south Austin, just shy of the river, the place was called Green Mesquite BBQ. We had all worked at the old hotel that was around 71 & 35, NE corner? By the old IRS complex? Might’ve been the Austin Opera House. Sunday night, Green Mesquite used to have an amateur bluegrass group, kind of country, a little rock’n’roll, that venerated, vaunted Austin Sound? Wan winter’s eve, maybe a fall show, early, early ’90s. Sitting there, the band sawing through, let’s just say “Orange Blossom Special” for an example, the recall isn’t what it used to be, or maybe some other song, something from the pantheon of Cosmic Cowboys singers and songwriters, but the music, fiddle, pedal steel, sawing through the tunes, under the Live Oaks redolent in the hues of night and aroma of smoked meat? It was that out-of-body experience. Decades later, I lived near that place, and it was the inspiration for Two-Meat Tuesday. I spent years in and out of there.
Maybe two-thirds done with the story, I hit upon that line about an “out-of-body” experience, and thought about my first time at Green Mesquite, and how there was that forward-facing flashback.
Not really what the story itself is about, either. The premise, suppose your ex, the “The One That Got Away,” calls on the morning of the wedding, and asks to be rescued…